In The Landing we love writing and sharing our stories.
We are learning how to add ideas to our stories to give the reader more information and paint a picture in the reader's head.
Here are some for you to enjoy.
I saw a snail at my house. I was very surprised. I was very scared.
Natalia
I was at the beach and I saw the easter eggs and the easter bunny.
Neveah
I loved the present that was up the chimney.
Morsal
I am climbing up the tree to get the juicy apple.
Liam
I saw a penguin in the swimming pool.
Emma
I love my family because they give me hugs.
Leila
I went to space and I went into outer space and it was fun.
Judah
I saw a rainbow and it rained and rained and rained.
Andy
I saw a big ant. It was crawling across the deck. I saw it on my deck. I liked it. It was big indeed!
Rylan
I am going to the pool and I am going to have an ice-cream.
Kane
I wished I could make a machine. It can find baddies for the police. I love it.
Joel
Hi there learners,
ReplyDeleteI love writing and sharing my stories too. I am hoping to write something to share in our next newsletter. When I read your work I want to know more, for example, why was Natalia scared by the snail? I wonder if the Easter bunny get sand in his paws at the beach? I ask myself how did Judah travel to outer space and what would the machine look like that would help the police to find baddies? When we write a story all writers need to think about what the person reading it needs to know next. I look forward to reading more of your writing soon.